Here are a bunch of 'narrative notes' I have written from the perspective of the little girl, to try and help aid a sense of narrative and progression within the game. During the playtest the feedback I got was that they were a little too wall of texty, so I'm going to try and cut them down. I also got feedback which stated players were unsure whether the spelling mistakes were intentional or not as they didn't seem consistent so I shall try and give them more of a sense of consistancey. I'm also going to add more little drawings on them as I take away words, and I'm going to change a lot of the text on them to state how she's very much looking forward to the main character being her new 'friend' in this world, and how lonely she is.
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